-----Original Message-----
From: Glenn M. Keeni [mailto:glenn@cysols.com]
Sent: Saturday, August 19, 2006 2:03 PM
To: syslog@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Syslog] MIB document decision
Dave,
Thanks for the review. I am in full agreement with the
observations.
This
present document belongs to the 3164 era. Now that the protocol, udp
documents are stable, it is time for an update.
The following are TBDs
1. Update terminology to bring it incline with the protocol
document.
2. Shift the base reference to the protocol document from RFC3164
3. Make the defaults specified in the DEFVALs consistent with the
protocol, udp, tls documents
4. Make the document RFC4181-compliant, idnits-compliant
[ref. draft-harrington-text-mib-doc-template-00.txt]
a. Add references for IMPORTS
b. Add a paragraph on relationship to other MIBs section
5. Review
a. Is syslDevCCtlConfFileName implementation-neutral?
b. Could syslDevOpsLastError contain sensitive information,
such
as passwords or user names? What will be the impact ?
c. Is the management functionality adequate?
6. Editorial nits.
MO=> managed objects
7. Make the changes and submit the revised I-D
1-4, 6-7 is doable. I will do it. I will look for WG input on item 5.
Particularly on 5c.
Cheers
Glenn
David Harrington wrote:
Hi,
I agree the terminology in the MIB document differs from that in
-protocol- and should be updated to match the WG consensus on
terminology.
Here are a few things I spotted that should be fixed or checked:
The references in the MIB are to RFC3164, not the current
-protocol-
document produced by the WG. Since -protocol- will be a
standard while
RFC3164 is informational, we should reference the standard
documents.
(If it is useful to compare the RFC3164 attributes to the
-protocol-
attributes, I recommend a section that shows how they map/compare.
There are DEFVAL default values; are these connsistent with the new
document?
Use existing textual-conventions (such as transportDomain)
rather than
SyslogTransport ?
Is syslDevCCtlConfFileName implementation-neutral?
MOs should be spelled out as managed objects.
syslDevOpsLastError - could this contain sen sitive
information, such
as passwords or user names?
Has the MIB been checked against RFC4181?
MIB Doctors will expect a section entitled "Relationship to
other MIB
Modules".
See
ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/internet-drafts/draft-harrington-tex
t-mib-doc-template-00.txt for further advice about what
should be in
the document.
The documents that contain the IMPORTS must be cited in
text outside
the MIB module.
The document does not pass the id-nits check by
http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/idnits.pyht
It would be good to make this RFC4181-compliant and
idnits-compliant
before we start the WGLC.
The document should also be compared to the functionality
described in
-protocol-, -udp-, and -tls- documents to make sure the
defaults are
consistent, and the management functionality adequate.
David Harrington
dharrington@huawei.com
dbharrington@comcast.net
ietfdbh@comcast.net
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